Well, I'm not a reporter by trade as you must know, so if a single sentence in my article does not pass muster, I guess i will just have to try to do better next time! I was really just trying to write an introduction there-- that sentence isn't really central to the piece. That being said, you'll have to explain to me what you think is so wrong with it that it warranted being singled out for comment like this.
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