Kurt, it does look good so keep working on it. I am just an Anti-Mission Statement person. I don't allow the terminology and never did in my past lives. A Mission Statement is nothing but Business Speak BS. Lose it or get rid of the "pretty BS" and do something like:
To “Make A Profit” by providing a quality product at a very competitive price, in a controlled systematic way, for a sustained period of time to each of our customers.
"To make, provide, sell, stand by a product and make a profit."
"Our goal is to do it right and be the best at what we do in our area."
Plain and simple.... no Pretty BS.
Go to http://seo.seocompany.ca/top-mission-statement/ and read the mission statements for Microsoft, Google, Intel, Amazon, Ebay, Dell, Yahoo, Adobe and Stumble upon....mostly one liners with no BS.
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